Monday, October 8, 2007

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A pitiful tear rolls down my cheek
Not a whimper to be heard
The back of my throat tender and dry
Not to utter a word
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Poison 9901 08 October 2007

So emotional and filled with rage. 'Like a chalice overflowing with venom' Very picturest write, you chose your words very well 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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