Monday, January 24, 2005

Confusion Comments

Rating: 3.3

through the mist
and all the confusion
i see him.
he's running towards me
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Elsa Bear
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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 25 September 2022

A most beautiful and powerful poem

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long gone 08 April 2005

excellent work Elsa.

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dissatified exmember 28 January 2005

I have never been able to trust fully again. I always have a corner of reserve in my mind. I protect myself so much I don't have time for a relationship. Stupid or wise? who knows. I guess I will never know.

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James Wright 25 January 2005

Always a fan of posotive Elsa. Nice.

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Warren Augustus De Guzman 24 January 2005

That is the hardest part. Fighting the fear of tragedy. Fighting the fear of heartbreak. But once you are free of that, you never look back. Great poem. Heartfelt as always. -war

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Elsa Brooks 24 January 2005

aaaww UR cute and lovely! ! much love

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Graham Leese 24 January 2005

cute and lovely he pulls my hand and i never look back. is particularly nice

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