Although I think you'll break my heart, 
I know you'll tear my life appart, 
For you, I'll shead a single tear, 
It was you, who taught my heart to fear,
                
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Wow. You are really good with rhyming and telling a story. very nice. -Autumn
This is my absolute favorite! ! ! It gave me chills as well. I felt like It would be something I would write You have an amazing talent. I hope you go some where with it! !