Tuesday, September 13, 2016

Confusion Comments

Rating: 4.5

The autumn in the gardens tears me up
The darkness in the beacons fears me up
These wrongs in rights
and blues in whites
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Jazib Kamalvi 05 April 2017

A sublime poetic confusion. Thanks

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Akhtar Jawad 13 September 2016

Arfa you are a promising poetess, this one is a beautiful poem by you.

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Nosheen Irfan 13 September 2016

A thoughtful write. Yes, there are a lot of confusing things for the human mind. We try to find answers for them but hardly with any success at times. But it's a good sign that human intellect questions n probes things. Well penned.

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Arfa Kalera

Arfa Kalera

Sargodha, Pakistan
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