Thursday, March 22, 2012

Confusion Comments

Rating: 4.9

I wanted to go right but went left
I wanted to go up but went down
I wanted to cry but I laughed.
I wanted in my life a displacement
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Peter Maxharya 14 September 2012

A superb poem! Well chosen words confusion in this life irony this world is well brought to light in this fine art of writting.Goodos!

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Peter Maxharya 14 September 2012

A superb poem! Well chosen words confusion in this life irony this world is well brought to light in this fine art of writting.Goodos!

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Peter Maxharya 14 September 2012

A superb poem! Well chosen words confusion in this life irony this world is well brought to light in this fine art of writting.Goodos!

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Peter Maxharya 14 September 2012

A superb poem! Well chosen words confusion of life: irony in this world is well brought to light in this writting.

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Jinal Oswal 29 March 2012

This is life.... its confusing to me too... why we do things that are beyond our wishes... we want to heal the wound but in turn we are hurt... why we end up in a mess? ? people are out of reach and scope... never can understand them... I loved this poem... Very well... :)

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Kumar Parashar 27 March 2012

there are some poems you enjoy while reading it....but rarely you come across a poem like this one which is ok till you are reading it, and once you are finished with it, you realize how beautiful it was and the feeling that you are left with is long lasting......congrats brother on this great achievement

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Lacey Schumacher 26 March 2012

that was a very sad poem it made wanna cry i like ur poems Abdul Wahab

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Harindhar Reddy 24 March 2012

Jeepers creepers! With outmost honest you expressed your confusion without confusion and showing the light with twilight of knowledge............. When truth is not beauty and it is confined in When falsehood is not ugly and it is spread out like perfume I love this piece of writing and keep enlightening us as we feel delighted! 10++++++++++++

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Young Church Poetry 24 March 2012

Wow, well written with a strong message. The world we are living today is very confusing, when our leaders don't know what is right or wrong.

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Farah Ilyas 23 March 2012

hey, , , this is what this is life we have to face unpredictable, unexpected & confused ways.. suprerb poems..i like its rhythmic tone

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 23 March 2012

Its hard to single some lines out bcoz the poem is superb, i also realy like the ones Herojit picked..well written poem Wahab.

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Malaya Roses 23 March 2012

The truth was drawn in this poem. Human are bound to have confusion about what was happening with them because, before any decision taken... many consideration must be given balance attention. Thanks for a real-life reflection poem...! ! !

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