Boy! This is a heavy situation. There is a lot underneath that needs to be fleshed out. The writing is rather direct but the underlying message is missing somewhere along the way. All that is clear, is that help is needed for this poor girl. The structure is fine, it's all in the content.
GW62
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Boy! This is a heavy situation. There is a lot underneath that needs to be fleshed out. The writing is rather direct but the underlying message is missing somewhere along the way. All that is clear, is that help is needed for this poor girl. The structure is fine, it's all in the content. GW62