Wednesday, August 30, 2006

Confused Questioning Comments

Rating: 5.0

Have I come too far
To turn back now
Will this be my only love
My heart and mind constantly fight
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Jennifer Woodland
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That's the power of love - eliciting such introspection. You write of the mental indecision it brings in a relatable way. Good work.

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Abigail Keller 30 August 2006

Your poem lives up to its title, that's for sure! I really enjoyed this one. ~Amber~

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Catastrophe King 30 August 2006

Interesting..... This is a good read. You have the power of narration and your style is simple. Loved it.

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