Tuesday, December 19, 2017

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What troubles me is when girls and boys find each other,
Temporary and for pleasure,
But not forever.
Yet they invest so much time which isn't cleaver.
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Safiyyah Manjra
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Jazib Kamalvi 23 December 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Safiyyah. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 19 December 2017

Contemporary Love is such all around. Good

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2017

A unique write that invites our careful introspection into facets of temporary pleasure

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