Confused Comments

Most people would be very confused in a situation like this. This is a very heartfelt and soulful piece, written from the depths of your heart and soul. There are several spelling and grammar errors, and maybe you would want to correct those. The way this is written is good, but the corrections need to be done so the reader can have a smooth poem, instead of the jerky one here. If I may I would like to edit this for you, and show you what I mean. Let me know. Love & hugs, Barbara