Thursday, November 15, 2012

Confused Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't ask me who I am
Because I don't know anymore

Don't ask me what I believe
Because I'm no longer sure
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Alla Simone 20 November 2012

Loved the whole thing, but some highlights would be: Don't ask me what I believe Because I'm no longer sure AND The answers I once knew so well Have slowly but surely departed Honest & relatable, nice work.

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Aria Siren 20 November 2012

Leaving me stranded In a mess of mine own thoughts Wishing I was back where I started How many times have I thought the exact same thing! Its like a ball of yarn that you used to have wrapped up tightly and confidently suddenly gets pushed out of your hand and unraveled. Now you can't get it back how it was and you're not even sure if you want to. You expressed yourself very well and very honestly. Awesome job!

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