Some kids in a playground
playing the round
of your dad is my dad...
suddenly found
...
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Not so confused-we are all one big happy (?) family, right?
Like your title..it is confused. I am hunger to know who he is! ! really interesting poem...keep it up fri
this pervasive blight of the single parent...and fractured family unit...portrayed with some emotion and exasperation. ***
A thoughtful write, so many children have mum and dad living apart, some must be very confused.
Brilliant one Sally - I'm definitely confused but not surprised - it's the way of the world these days! !
so mysterious and amazing one.! the title should exactly be that.he he...Confused..! i think that question mark should be removed, because it really is confused! Really fine and Good
amazin', really beautifulllll! ! ! !