Wednesday, August 15, 2012

Confused? Comments

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Some kids in a playground
playing the round
of your dad is my dad...
suddenly found
...
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Vipins Puthooran 29 September 2012

amazin', really beautifulllll! ! ! !

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Constance K Yost 20 September 2012

Not so confused-we are all one big happy (?) family, right?

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Eindaray Kyaw 15 September 2012

Like your title..it is confused. I am hunger to know who he is! ! really interesting poem...keep it up fri

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Saadat Tahir 13 September 2012

this pervasive blight of the single parent...and fractured family unit...portrayed with some emotion and exasperation. ***

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Heather Wilson 18 August 2012

A thoughtful write, so many children have mum and dad living apart, some must be very confused.

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Valerie Dohren 17 August 2012

Brilliant one Sally - I'm definitely confused but not surprised - it's the way of the world these days! !

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 15 August 2012

so mysterious and amazing one.! the title should exactly be that.he he...Confused..! i think that question mark should be removed, because it really is confused! Really fine and Good

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Haverhill Suffolk England
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