Saturday, February 27, 2010
Confused Comments
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confused and searching for the right things to say
i still don't know why you left me this way
i'm like a picture with out it's frame
the corners burned and crumpled, not looking the same
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Christopher Is Dead (but I'm More Than Alive)
08 March 2010
I like your rhyme scheme. And those were really nice metaphors and similes. I really understand how you feel. The last two lines were my favorite.
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7/27/2025 12:16:21 PM # 1.0.0
My Grandma is a professional artist and my Grandfather is my Grandmothers framer...i just wrote a poem about my Grandfather being my Grandmothers frame... cool the connection of you referencing you being without a frame...your a painting...poetic...***this one shows that your not in love with the boy but the idea of being in love...