Confused Comments

Brilliant how you describe a confused person, amazing work.

Excellent piece of writing! Thank you for sharing it =)

Dearly appreciated Shan! I've found so many great poems here

No one can feel what you are inside of that paralyzed smile. Nice expressions here my dear friend...... you give a great message.. always good to get something out of the poem..after reading it.. with lv shan

Thanks Mona. I wanted to try something different. I'm not sure I nailed it, but your comment is appreciated

cool. very nice and creative.