Sunday, April 5, 2009

Confused Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beat my brain
Carrying in shreds fragments of the confused thoughts
Having grown weak from lacerated wounds
I will shrink deeply in itself
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Obinna Eruchie 24 May 2009

a set of interwoven emotions of a voice confused as the title suggests.

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Barry A. Lanier 05 April 2009

a hyacinth of weaved emotions in somewhat of a supersonic state of unravel.....the charaacter definitely in need of respite....

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