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thats a sea of despair indeed to see the world so full of people yet every where there is lonliness and a void darkness engulfing...............poignant

A very odd way of explaining it but we feel your pain great poem

woah. did you really have these dreams. it is also good 10

Fantastic! Very well written...

You are an exceptional poet Deep: -) 'tis an honour to have read your lines

excellent write! ! Very unusual.

Beautifully written...great poem...

hi! remember me? hope so. i absolutly love this poem! i love the sort of story it give to the reader and the mood it put me in. message me back please! and also comment on my poems as well ok?

This is a beautifully written poem, reminding me of A walk in the Woods...I do do enjoy this style to get points across.....blessings

interesting.. i enjoyed reading your work.

Nice and different theme...nobody is bereft of the sorrows while living..

And thanks to everybody who have appreciated my work! ! ! ! ! ! a big thanks from the core of my heart! ! ! !

@Ahmed Khaled; sir; as i have already stated; this poem is a result of the inspiration i got from your poetry......i feel it's quiet an achievement that you have acknowledged it! ! ! !

Very amazing. :) I really like this. It's has very good expression.: D

this is amazing expression and i commend u for that.... cuz generations can talk and say stuff and then u can easily believe what others think about you but i think its even more important to know urself and what u believe sometimes is all that matters.dont let people, things determine who u are or r gonna be... sometimes in this world u have to fight hard for the good things.

I'm too late to be that beholder who see and see deeply such a beautiful piece of art 'made in deep' not 'made in china' even not 'made in japan' really really really i'm proud of you my dear painter photographer poet, you made my day colourful, joyful and flying but flying in your blue wide sky, i wish i had more health than i have now to be able to be a long time beholder, u're good really u're good, BROTHER PHDAHMEDKHALED

great one..beautiful! ! blend of emotions what we humans go through but fail to express them...nice write

@Diana, you are right, should have emphasized over the fact; the 'lame' word is obstructing the flow of the poem! ! ! ! thank you for your opinion! !

Thank you Deep for asking me to read your poem and I found it a thought provoking read. As you asked me for constructive criticism I am happy to provide it. I think that One day should be two seperate words (this is not important, but perhaps you could consider this possibility) . In addition I think the weak point of the poem is was it so lame - perhaps you could consider another word to rhyme with same. All the best!

Thank you very much! ! ! ! i am glad that you appreciated it! ! ! !