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each day you have left and what you leave to your children will be less and less until there is only the same. An excellent poem expressing the reality and truth about life.Inheritance is nothing more than the complete darkness for the generations.A heartfelt poem. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

I love the creativity and the naturality in this poem. Good Work Done. Kudos Dehn...

A painful truth: (I wish more people were able to appreciate the wonder and beauty of being different, truly different. Not just fashionably different... odd how it's a little fashionable. Yes, lets pray that there are more people out there advocating for people to feel comfortable to be themselves and dream their pretty dreams. Why judge someone/something that is bringing no harm to anyone, anything? Leaves me clueless. Great write! Thanks! :)

I think honestly this is great. The nail on the head. I thank God for artists like you that bring color to this grey world! Outstanding...