Conflicts Comments

My heart kept quarrelling; a duel of conflicting emotions twisting and bleeding my very soul; want to be pure like crystal......... life of conflicts especially when we are young...... you have really portrayed it so well my dear poet. let this poem be an eye-opener for all young boys and girls.. thank u.. tony

I have read this poem once. Whatever you do, you could directly direct your hand to sky. You don't need to whisper at anyone's doorsteps to purify. I love the poem and its diction. Congratulation. You have a lot in you. Plz keep writing and show them, those who try to stop you even in dreams, that you are indestructible.

A well articulated train of thoughts penned in poetic diction to capture the essence of the poem and the poet's convictions. A very nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.