Monday, May 25, 2015

Conflict Of The Silvery Dreams Comments

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When did I tell you love is sweet
mistook it not for being a treat
though it's worth the challenge
which is indeed hard to beat
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Asma Khan
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Mr. M Jamal 25 May 2015

It was a delightful read. However, couplets looked just broken in between, with temporary loss of rhythm. Takimg form of a blue poem. nonetheless, very finely written poetry. :) Please pardon my pointing, I am also a poet in training. :)

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