Friday, September 19, 2014

Conflict Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lovely dawn was on way
Here and there some dew drops
That groomed in last night
But the marvel sprawl this time
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 20 September 2014

Life carries on and exists between opposing or incompatible impulses......a very well thought out piece....... nicely composed

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Akhtar Jawad 20 September 2014

Dew drops are pious but after falling somewhere follow the path provided by their fates.

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