Thursday, June 18, 2009

Conflict... Comments

Rating: 4.7

My tears are droping inside..

I think,
is it me who should decide?
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Hala Hash.
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Sarah Abdullah 23 June 2009

Love the lines..... Expressing..... every one of us got a conflict deep inside.....I guess that adds to the individuality of each....

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Afzal Shauq 20 June 2009

But now.. It's hard, people to hurt to keep you satisfied.. And I want to keep both happy.. But why should i? it's much that i've tried.. It's the time.. The time of seeing things from my side.. good lines of the rich poem..and lovely written.. hope you will write more... well done... liked your poetry..10++++++

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Alex Lewis 19 June 2009

Being honest, I wish I could write as good as you. Your ending was like the perfect cherry atop a Sundae.

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soft thoughts despite that conflict where there is a tril to decide....well penned, your words let me miss jordan mainly te airport that connection point....thanks

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