Thursday, January 1, 2004

Confirmation Comments

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The shadow of th' Almighty's cloud
Calm on this tents of Israel lay,
While drooping paused twelve banners proud,
Till He arise and lead this way.
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John Keble
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Sylvaonyema Uba 09 January 2017

Nice poem built on the stylistic embellishment of a quatrain of ten stanzas. Sylva-Onyema Uba

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Chinedu Dike 09 January 2017

Insightful with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing.

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Susan Williams 09 January 2017

Then to the desert breeze unrolled, Cheerly the waving pennons fly, Lion or eagle- each bright fold A lodestar to a warrior's eye.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Now that's an image with which to stir the soul!

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Seamus O Brian 09 January 2017

...Thee how strong, our hearts how frail... When all the wars and strife of life have passed over us like the storms of summer, we are left old and frail and so much more aware of our finite mortality.

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Tom Allport 09 January 2017

a time and place has been pre-booked for every race? visual confirmation will be sent at a later date.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 January 2017

Charmed life! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Brian Jani 01 May 2014

Nice poems, I like your style

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John Keble

John Keble

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