Confinement Comments

the first paregraph is worth repeating.10

What a lovely confinement...... i love it... great ideas.....10

this is a very natural poem of love in a cyber age and it could happen to anyone, anytime. beautiful! 10 smiles for you, sir!

You have created a totally different style here, your own. Its interesting to read and enoyable.

A very interesting, delightful and different romantic poem. Good work! Loyd

Contemporary romance, but as timeless as love itself. Fantastic imagery. Ten without question. Warmest regards, Sandra

A love poem nicely written.10 for this.

well...10... Tsira

I THINK YOUR POETIC LISNCE IS NOW PAYING OFF. YOUA ARE MORE THAN JUST A POET: BUT A FRIEND WHO IS CREATING MUSIC SOUNDBITS ONLINE. WE LOVE YOU LIKE KISSES. WE LIKE TO SAY MNCWA TO YOU. lOVELY LOVELY LOVELY; YOUARE SO LOVELY, DOES ANYONE EVER SAY THESE WORDS TO YOU.

WELL WRITTEN. u get 10++ Thanks for your nice comment on my poem My Balloon.

the metaphors are exquisite in your lime green world and deserve a 10 cheers Shimon

This is a cute love poem.... nicely written and very original.....

Hi, I will really say that your poems are catching. Dare from Lekki lagos.Nigeria

I agree with Onelia A's comments and also say I really enjoyed the poem, but I have a problem as I have difficulty finding my cell-phone.

The beginning 'Let’s exchange some tales and jokes' prepares for the light ironic end 'I’m confined in your cell like sim card'. I like this strange but quite appropriate metaphor.