Wednesday, May 14, 2014

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Are there shackles tied to his bedpost, because he isn't getting up.

And when he does, a half-hearted walk out of the bedroom followed by a yawn drenched in fading sleepiness.
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Govind S Harigovindam
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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 30 September 2014

The poet has created a peculiar world of life and confined in a room with such events of life. Life itself felt it in that way and the poem is a beautiful one.

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Geetha Jayakumar 09 August 2014

Beautiful poem....and the lines interesting... a loud burp which broke the symphony of silence pervading in the room. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing and do keep writing...

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Gajanan Mishra 14 May 2014

resuming life, I love life, very good writing. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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