Wednesday, December 17, 2008

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Rating: 5.0

Why must you still visit me in my dreams
I know its not her doing but there she gleams
Raised up, I miss her so much
Alone, craving her warm touch
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Izik Alcox
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Drishti Magoo 28 December 2008

i'll start crying now... so nicely your poem expresses the inevitability of our common friend, the emotion of love... but is it our friend? dont think so.. it stands by us in every pain..too late to realise.. that the root cause stands by us. its so degenerating! except the strength it helps in writing poetry.he he lolz but this piece of work is true and real and pure.. like..oh you can guess now.. :)

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Jacob Gifford 17 December 2008

boo yaaa i loved it plz read one of mine i got 5 i liked your poem it ment alought to me

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