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Light and white, fluffy, like snowflakes.
Flower girls stoop to pluck them for keepsakes.
A rainbow of paper o'er us floats down.
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a well descriptive poem of a happy and memorable event? ............well written.
really loved the imagery, snowflakes keepsakes, rainbows, colourful clouds, paper charmed, I'm a fan :)
Sweet. I don't really identify with young newlywed love any more, but I value your imagery. We readers can see what you see through this descriptive poem.
Thanks Michelle. I wrote this poem following my daughter's wedding.
I got pelted with hailstone, but at least it was white! congrats on poem of the day as well!
Wow, you were really lucky. I got pelted with rice when I was stupid, er, I mean married... :) my right eye still twitches a bit after all these years.... Pretty poem though, a bit mushy I think, but certainly young couples ought to live in such a world...
Thanks John. I wrote this one whilst reminiscing about my daughter's wedding. I hope couples of all ages can live in such a world!
nice poem...wish you all the very best in life, Jeanette...
How lovely of you Jasbir. Thank you. I wish you the very best in life also.
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7/28/2025 3:51:52 AM # 1.0.0
With each handful! ! Thanks for sharing.