Certainly, the confessions of a man that has suffered much pain. I might
suggest that you read my poem called PAIN. It is wise to give true warnings
to potential lovers because you don't want to waste your time in fruitless endeavors. I thought the structure of the poem was fine. The rhymes were
also very good. The rhythm was a bit spotty but that takes time. All in all,
very good.
GW62
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Certainly, the confessions of a man that has suffered much pain. I might suggest that you read my poem called PAIN. It is wise to give true warnings to potential lovers because you don't want to waste your time in fruitless endeavors. I thought the structure of the poem was fine. The rhymes were also very good. The rhythm was a bit spotty but that takes time. All in all, very good. GW62