Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Confessions Of A Man Comments

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Yeah ladies I understand
all the things you went through.
I too carry the scars
from love's battle wounds.
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Corey Campbell (BlackChild)
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Greenwolfe 1962 24 February 2009

Certainly, the confessions of a man that has suffered much pain. I might suggest that you read my poem called PAIN. It is wise to give true warnings to potential lovers because you don't want to waste your time in fruitless endeavors. I thought the structure of the poem was fine. The rhymes were also very good. The rhythm was a bit spotty but that takes time. All in all, very good. GW62

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