Tuesday, July 31, 2007

Confessions Of A Bound Soul Comments

Rating: 3.6

Brother, my brother,
How selfish was I
While you seemed to struggle,
I sat idly by
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Amanda Saveley
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Janani Jain 17 November 2013

this is grt poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! it makes me to get back with the my bro! ! ! ! ! ! ! I love u bro

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Cherish Janis 05 October 2011

loved it. makes me think of my bro! miss him soooo much! add me!

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Christopher Fox 05 November 2008

What a beautiful poem. I can almost completely relate to the entire piece. You did a great job at writing a poem that was simple and engaging.

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Brent Irving 14 June 2008

ur last verse, touched me in a way no poem about brothers has, as i have been away from my brother many times but not aslong as this. i am young and turn to poems to help me get through the rougher times. great fukn poem. lovely verse

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Samantha Cicchini 24 January 2008

I think this is really beautiful. The language is not too overbearing and it just holds so much emotion. I really loved it. Were you inspired by Fullmetal Alchemist?

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