I thought
I bottled the ego,
the demon came out.
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The wonderful use of verb form...I thought I bottled the ego, the demon came out......
Lovely poem! Beautifully structure.Know thyself! That's the great message to remember for a lifetime! Well done Alexei.Congratulations and may you reach the highest level in your poetic quest.
Beautifully written in it's simplicity. I love your structure. The greatest confession one can make in life perhaps is indeed to oneself. Thanks Alex!
Cute poem Anu. Keep writing and expanding your knowledge in poetry...
We all battle with these everyday; well described humanity in all of us, thanks. The love is in the trying and the accepting..