you come to me unnoticeably
stranger…you are to me
hidden smiles, whisper on your lips
no signs that you are watching me...
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Lady Grace, there is nothing wrong or feel bad about confessing your feelings in a simple (heartfelt) details, it is courageous, no a disgrace...It takes a lot to let all, these feelings freely flaw, coming out, not just from your maybe your barren lips, but from the bottom of your heart! , you got my vote,10+, Love and Peace, Romeo
Enjoyable to read your open and heartfelt thoughts and feelings. I like the way you balance and format the poem.
Heartfelt confession of love, it needs no repayment, good write 10 Lynda xx
As usual written with so much emotion Lady Grace... You should never feel bad about expressing your emotions to some one., . Better to express them rather than keep them in your head, ... lovely write..10 with love shan
Very nice poem. A title, is clarifying of plot.. Good written. I read with pleasure.(10v.) Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt
Where is the title found in the poem? confession definition con·fes·sion (kə n fes̸ h′ ə n) noun 1. the act of confessing; acknowledgment; specif., a. an admission of guilt, esp. formally in writing, as by a person charged with a crime b. the confessing of sins to a priest in the sacrament of penance c. a general acknowledgment of sin, or a form expressing this used in public worship 2. something confessed 3. acknowledgement of a true statement by another a. a statement of religious beliefs, esp. as held by a Christian church, usually longer than a creed in full confession of faith b. a church having such a confession: communion 4. the tomb or shrine of a martyr or confessor 5. a story of or as of one's life experiences, revealing faults and confidential personal details
oh this is alike morning breeze! so much love in you! just store some love for me! :) 10+
A heartfelt poem with enough left brain thrown in. I would have a small suggestion, please see inbox H
This is so tender a tribute, blended with carefully penned words that suit the theme.Music was also abundant.
love needs no pay, just more love in return... nice poem
'...in the darkest part of my life, / when there are thorns on my trails/ you give the sympathy I never know/ honey just this moment I realized/ how can I pay to you? ' Touching lines.
We should all be so lucky! Very well done, and keep up the great work...Jeff.
I hope this guy feels the same way Or maybe You should just confess to God instead...10s
A poem of gratitude..your heart written words are so lovely to read....We have so much to thank the heavens for don't we my lovely...great work 10..as always
the confession of a soulful and yearning heart...lovely one indeed!
read like a psalm to me........ i like it.
beautiful and warm confession, , sweetly said