Tuesday, September 15, 2009

Confession Comments

Rating: 4.8

you come to me unnoticeably
stranger…you are to me
hidden smiles, whisper on your lips
no signs that you are watching me...
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lady grace
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Tamara - Hanaring 18 September 2009

beautiful and warm confession, , sweetly said

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Romeo Della Valle 18 September 2009

Lady Grace, there is nothing wrong or feel bad about confessing your feelings in a simple (heartfelt) details, it is courageous, no a disgrace...It takes a lot to let all, these feelings freely flaw, coming out, not just from your maybe your barren lips, but from the bottom of your heart! , you got my vote,10+, Love and Peace, Romeo

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Ben Gieske 17 September 2009

Enjoyable to read your open and heartfelt thoughts and feelings. I like the way you balance and format the poem.

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Lynda Robson 17 September 2009

Heartfelt confession of love, it needs no repayment, good write 10 Lynda xx

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 September 2009

As usual written with so much emotion Lady Grace... You should never feel bad about expressing your emotions to some one., . Better to express them rather than keep them in your head, ... lovely write..10 with love shan

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Joseph Poewhit 17 September 2009

Sort of like letting the air out of a balloon.

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Maria Barbara Korynt 17 September 2009

Very nice poem. A title, is clarifying of plot.. Good written. I read with pleasure.(10v.) Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt

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Luke Easter 16 September 2009

Where is the title found in the poem? confession definition con·fes·sion (kə n fes̸ h′ ə n) noun 1. the act of confessing; acknowledgment; specif., a. an admission of guilt, esp. formally in writing, as by a person charged with a crime b. the confessing of sins to a priest in the sacrament of penance c. a general acknowledgment of sin, or a form expressing this used in public worship 2. something confessed 3. acknowledgement of a true statement by another a. a statement of religious beliefs, esp. as held by a Christian church, usually longer than a creed in full confession of faith b. a church having such a confession: communion 4. the tomb or shrine of a martyr or confessor 5. a story of or as of one's life experiences, revealing faults and confidential personal details

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 September 2009

oh this is alike morning breeze! so much love in you! just store some love for me! :) 10+

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Lost Salley 16 September 2009

This is a really lovely love poem! great job!

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Herbert Nehrlich2 16 September 2009

A heartfelt poem with enough left brain thrown in. I would have a small suggestion, please see inbox H

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Aziz Alkaabi 16 September 2009

This is so tender a tribute, blended with carefully penned words that suit the theme.Music was also abundant.

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 16 September 2009

love needs no pay, just more love in return... nice poem

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Obinna Eruchie 16 September 2009

'...in the darkest part of my life, / when there are thorns on my trails/ you give the sympathy I never know/ honey just this moment I realized/ how can I pay to you? ' Touching lines.

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Js Black 16 September 2009

We should all be so lucky! Very well done, and keep up the great work...Jeff.

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Eyan Desir 15 September 2009

I hope this guy feels the same way Or maybe You should just confess to God instead...10s

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~ Jon London ~ 15 September 2009

A poem of gratitude..your heart written words are so lovely to read....We have so much to thank the heavens for don't we my lovely...great work 10..as always

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Catrina Heart 15 September 2009

the confession of a soulful and yearning heart...lovely one indeed!

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read like a psalm to me........ i like it.

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