I try to say this as clear as the sky
Plain as a tea break at noon
It’s not outrageous thing anyway
Just a simple note of truth
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my wife is showering and i must be off before she gets out or who knows what trouble i will be in? . i'll have to get back here to read this at least one more time. some of it i have trouble with as, i suppose, english is not your first language. thanks for your time in commenting on my poem cloistered oyster. bri edwards
I hate to bargain with probability Can not just let go and sigh As a kiss good night on the door step Though it sound silly, it’s not a fad “Man, I’m in love with you”.not a bargain at all and not probability too.. it is pure admission and not confesssion too. lovely kusuma... i liked it....10 read mine..lovely life...anywhere.. Mary to marry
Excellent poem. Bold, sentimental purity, classical.
I love the tes break at noon line its nice and so true. I like you're ending also this was a wonderful piece KRISTA
What an eloquent poem you have shared, a true confession of feelings, of being inlove. Written so softly with simple lines and thoughts...Thanks for the wonderful read i had.
A very bold and black and white confession of love. A good poem.
Good poem, Confession is good for the soul.