Confession Comments

You have chosen an excellent topic for your confession - time - and you have personalized it and made it tangible - someone you can talk to. I believe this poem is saying something about delaying gratification, being patient and above all, savoring the 'now' moment so beautifully expressed in your final line. A fine poem written with the devotion of a prayer. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

It is a humbling feeling to be sorry for past deeds deemed unreversable and bad by one who is sorry and sad. Great poem. we all make mistakes, the only way to limit or reduce those errors of our ways is to realize that they are not worth repeating or recommitting. God bless all poets-MJG.

Reshma, as each moment of our lives changes, it is gone and the next one begins. We cannot relive it except in our minds eye, so it is best to leave it and enjoy the present moment. If we lead our lives this way we become happy have no real need of time, and become closer to our God. Great poem, it is good to reflect on the way we lead our lives. Happy Christmas and may 2009 be good to you. Bob

time ever elusive- at times obtrusive- but can't quarrel with it, for it does heal.10 Mamta

It is time for me to confess It was only you with me in time of joy and duress............ Good work..................good piece

Your language is always exquisitive.Leaves one thinking

Ths has been put beautifully, the confession and the melting of ego and fusion of consciousness into Kutastha. In the so frequent moments of heady ego, we blame one and evferyone for the happenings, including God! The act of forgiveness versed beautifully by Reshma Ji touches heart!

The existentialist here blaming yourself for what ever happens, , , philosophic, deep, and what is it that is on the back of your mind, reshma, , ,10

A remarkable poem of great wisdom and acceptance... Wonderful piece..inspiring poem! Great write!

A humbling piece... HG: -) xx