Thursday, April 10, 2008
Confesions And Faith Comments
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it started a long time ago, before i ever knew your name.
now that i have done it i will never be the same.
whilst i sit here in this park, surrounded by darkend shadows,
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racheal wiese
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7/25/2025 10:26:42 AM # 1.0.0
The message is there but the structure is harsh. Try breaking it up into little stories remember you are writing poetry not an esay. You are a very good writer you only need to develop your stucture. I really liked it Thanks