Thursday, July 9, 2020

Coney Island Ii Comments

Rating: 4.8

You look so lonely there eating a sandwich by the boardwalk
You told me you have been trying to
Have quality time with yr son
But he rather go alone to the Freak Shows at the Amusement Park
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2020

" I usually come here alone" ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kevin Patrick 10 July 2020

This reminds me of the old British movie brief encounters, two people meeting for a connection they have lost with their loved ones. When I read this I find there is such a great sadness in the narrator, that open disposition masks an inner sadness, the feeling of being alone.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 July 2020

A well crafted poem.... Simply wonderful.....10++

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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