Wednesday, August 31, 2005

Conductor Of Heroes Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know the fate of the world
I know the dreams of the oppressed
I know the cures reveal new maladies
I know futility
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Kelly Vinal
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Roger Cornish 29 September 2008

'Because I believe in last chapters Because I’ve seen it in your blue eyes Crying' I write poetry because of lines like these.... I want to write as good as this... I try and write as good as this.... If I fail, as I often do..... At least I can read and enjoy and be lifted by reading poetry like this. A word................ awesome.

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zip zap 12 November 2005

is the fate of the world written in a neverending score? brings to mind images of futility and balence. very nice! -phoebe

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Kimberly Strothman Anderson 03 September 2005

This poetry is touching

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Mary Nagy 03 September 2005

What a beautifully written poem Kelly. Very emotional. Sincerely, Mary

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Herbert Nehrlich1 31 August 2005

So much said in so little space. Wonderful poem. H

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Enemacles Redux 31 August 2005

Truly a wild and magnificent creation!

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Allan James Saywell 31 August 2005

great write kelly a soul searching poem from a young poet who shows a lot of promise you have my vote for the day Warm regards allan

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Adryan Barnathan 31 August 2005

I know you have a good heart...Let's keep the human in humanity! ! ! Wonderful words that inspire...!

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Kelly Vinal

Kelly Vinal

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