Wednesday, July 19, 2006

Condone My Stupidity Comments

Rating: 4.5

Adjusting myself to suit your needs
reaping the wrong of your deeds
not saying out loud what i felt
not so sure if i could've dealt
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Carike Klokow
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At times, the compromises, the changes we make to please our lovers, our partners are the wrong compromises and changes. We need to let go. For me, your poem addressed this and I saw it as a message of hope in that this person was moving on, but a painful message of hope. Peace, L&T

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Kefentse Sathekge 05 November 2007

your poem rhymes so well, good work.

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Carike Klokow

Carike Klokow

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