The world around, has closed on me,
Confining me, within life and death.
The days of my freedom, have passed away,
leaving me naught but;
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So far my favorite. Use od words and rhyme is awesome. Another sad one with lots to say. great job!
How eloquently put! Don't we all have journeys we wish we had never taken? I think these are our most valuable lessons-ones which we would never choose. Mary-