Monday, January 14, 2013

Condemned Comments

Rating: 5.0

Alone, only with his thoughts
Heart frozen, icebox
He who drinks, feelings which he fought
Inhale mind in a daze
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Kelvin Owusu
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Nader Baheri 18 January 2013

undoubtedly this is the best of yours.i like its dark theme. the ending is really something else. such passions and woes never gonna be removed even with Mary jane or alcohol.somewhat all of us are condemned to this destiny when we came to this world, cause all of us were children and all of us were the thiefs of our parents'treasures. great job~nb

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Valerie Dohren 14 January 2013

Drinking to excess does not solve problems - interesting write.

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Kelvin Owusu

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