Tuesday, April 7, 2009

Condemnation Comments

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It must have been so difficult to have held your tongue all this time
Wanting to tell me what a wanton woman I am.
When all the while I have been so naive thinking that I am loved by you
When in fact you are condemning me deep in your heart times two.
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June FeirCruz
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Les Derbyshire 11 April 2009

Sorrow, anger, regret, a sense of what might have been - it's all here. A poem filled with feeling. The longer lines slow down the reader and set the pace so well. Thank you once more June.

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