Concupiscence Comments

Ah! Indeed what a pictorially creative metaphor in depicting the essence of concupiscence...So much quality substance in so few words....Not an easy feat, young lady! ~FjR~

This is a well measured minimal expression of love and the feelings of protection and equality that love creates.

This sounds like 'Shakespeare. But a lot more comprehensible. Nice! !

the shade that cools His summer breath, the fire that warms His winter soul. great poem!

A kind of… maithuna, I'd say. When two is as one. Impressive! Enjoying your writing, I.G.

Small lines big meaning, the only meaning of true love of joined souls, luvli...regards