Concrete Spider Comments

For the spider to huddle with tangled twitching legs...........? How did that thundering splash come on the itsy -bitsy spider.... Mr Poet? So much about it beneath those written lines, I feel. Thought provoking nicely written poem. Enjoyed.

Quite descriptive of the itsy bitsy spider

Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.

Life is so delicate and precarious. This poem is delicate and beautiful. Thanks for sharing and congrats on Poem of the Day!

A very well crafted poem on minute observation... The imagery and the words are beautiful.. Thanks for sharing :)

Beautiful imagery and minute observation and their use in nicely crafted poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

To respect nature with things seen around you. Thanks for sharing.

this is q nice and simple piece of writing.spiders in our homes, natural insect control.

I too love shape poetry. To off-set the lines perhaps one could use.~`. Just a thought, even without it this is good. Adeline

I like it, experianced the same thing a few years ago.

Nice one! ! i like it....maybe it a tribute to spiderman too hahahaha :) nice write! _Unwritten Soul

ok.....it's supposed to look like a spider (hence, the title) , but PH won't let me off-set the lines: -(