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this is class! ! my god, im actually laughing. thought id forgotten how!
Very clever the way you've brought clever imagery to this piece. I really like this poem. God bless-Michael Jeffrey Gale.
this one is too good for words. If only MY mind worked like yours...all would be good with the world :)
This is the HARD EVIDENCE we have been looking for...for years! Great word work. Barb
Framed and displayed this 'conceptual' piece could be a contender for the Turner Prize! : -) Justine.
Good example of concrete thinking Also, I like that it rhymes so much
Ah, so that's where he's hiding. This is fantastic Chuck - very clever and it made me laught out loud. Hugs Anna xxx
I think the first letter spoils it, if you don't know what the C meant...? Danny
This is great, dark, yet funny. a clever poem even with only 3 different words used. have you done many other of these poems I like them. Best wishes Vincent
Stone me! Charles, this is a rock hard poem with a solid foundation, every lines a winner! Love from a chuckling Ernestine XXX
Chuck, Three enjoyed by me - - - (1) Souped - up was Okie - Dokie! :) (2) The genius was to cause the problem, and then sell the solution! :) (3) You seem to have the same old 'unproven', although concrete solution! :) B.V.A.