Friday, April 14, 2006

Concrete Poem #3: A Final Concrete Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

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Chuck Audette
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Barry Van Allen 18 April 2007

Chuck, Three enjoyed by me - - - (1) Souped - up was Okie - Dokie! :) (2) The genius was to cause the problem, and then sell the solution! :) (3) You seem to have the same old 'unproven', although concrete solution! :) B.V.A.

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Lee Degnan 19 December 2006

DEFINITELY, my kind of humor LOL Loved it! Lee

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alice sunderland 09 November 2006

this is class! ! my god, im actually laughing. thought id forgotten how!

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Michael Gale 08 August 2006

Very clever the way you've brought clever imagery to this piece. I really like this poem. God bless-Michael Jeffrey Gale.

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Richard Cock III 30 June 2006

and yet another one.

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Jerzegirl *~~ 26 April 2006

this one is too good for words. If only MY mind worked like yours...all would be good with the world :)

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Barbara Attaway 21 April 2006

This is the HARD EVIDENCE we have been looking for...for years! Great word work. Barb

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R H 20 April 2006

Framed and displayed this 'conceptual' piece could be a contender for the Turner Prize! : -) Justine.

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Mike Finley 19 April 2006

Good example of concrete thinking Also, I like that it rhymes so much

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Anna Russell 19 April 2006

Ah, so that's where he's hiding. This is fantastic Chuck - very clever and it made me laught out loud. Hugs Anna xxx

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Patricia Gale 17 April 2006

Clever and funny! Patricia

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Esther Leclerc 17 April 2006

HAW HAW HAWWWWWWWW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Est :

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Scarlett Treat 14 April 2006

DENSE, VERY DENSE, DEEP, VERY, VERY DEEP!

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Danny Reynolds 14 April 2006

I think the first letter spoils it, if you don't know what the C meant...? Danny

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Not Long Left 14 April 2006

This is great, dark, yet funny. a clever poem even with only 3 different words used. have you done many other of these poems I like them. Best wishes Vincent

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Ernestine Northover 14 April 2006

Stone me! Charles, this is a rock hard poem with a solid foundation, every lines a winner! Love from a chuckling Ernestine XXX

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Chuck Audette

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