Concrete Poem #2: Head On. Does This Commercial Make You Want To Kill Yourself? Comments

now THAT's effective advertising!

In answer to your question...YES! This commercial makes me want to kill myself and shoot the TV as well.....but I'd better do that in reverse order...oh, now I have a headache. Charles..you are not only a great poet, but a darn good artist! Barb

Wow. Your creativity is certainly something to be envied. I wonder how that woman can live with that voice of hers, or worse, how can her family live with it?

Dead on. Absolutely. LOL Were they ensuring that their product get sold by CAUSING the headache? If that even was what it was for.... ~~Lee

Sharp as a pistol.... clever guy, indeed! t x

He aims. He shoots. He wins. Wonderful, as ever!

SOMEDAY THEY WILL CALL THIS A BLAST FROM THE PAST, CHUCK! INNOVATIVE & CLEVERITY PERSONIFIED....HAVE A BANG-UP EVENING! '''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

Ah ha ha ha! ! ! I'm laughing as I type this. This is so clever and funny. I hate that commercial. I would NEVER buy that product. What a cool and clever dude you are.

This baby just hit the top 40 chart; climbing with a bullet. Really is high calibre stuff that's sure to trigger mass hysteria. Glad to see you taking aim at a new target audience. Smokin'! The name is Gunn, Greg Gunn.

You are such a clever fellow! ! ! I wonder will you read this one at your next poetry recital? ...LOL... Hugs, Dee

I can see you're gunning for the ad agency that dared to air such an infuriating commercial! We call it 4Head over here and the ads are equally dire! (Btw, didn't know you were such an accomplished artist..?) This poem is bang on! jz :)

H-H-H-HAR! ! ! Yes, it DOES, as a matter of fact... Where can I get some of that 'Dead On'? I think I need it now! Nice concrete work, Chuck, and it probably was. Thanks for sharing the pain! Est : ]

You're a pistol, Charles! I wasn't able to access the video you're referring to, so I can only imagine! Brian