Friday, April 14, 2006

Concrete Poem #1: 'soup' (A Tribute To Reinhard Döhl) Comments

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soupsoupsoup fly soupsoupsoupsoup
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Chuck Audette
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Dee Daffodil 09 May 2006

Hi Chuck...cute Chuckle...You were right about my concrete poem difficulties...tried to put one on the website and the letters kept fritzin on me...so I gave up! ! Grumble, mutter, grumble... Hugs, Dee

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R H 27 April 2006

OK you got me laughing out loud again! I love your work! :) Justine.

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Anna Russell 19 April 2006

funny stuff Mr A. Hugs Anna xxx

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Esther Leclerc 17 April 2006

A great giggle of a gag, Chuckles! The soup bowl looks parfait, by the way. I can't top Ernestine's funny lines, alas - still waking up! Maybe you can do a twist on a fairy tale sometime, like Goldilocks and poor little bear's constant disappointments? ! Just a thought. Est : ]

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Not Long Left 14 April 2006

Love this Charles funny, clever and pleasing on the eye. best wishes Vincent

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Ernestine Northover 14 April 2006

Ooopps! where's the fly swatter. Just tell it to buzz off. A souper write here, I hold great stock by this one. Love Ernestine XXX

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

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