Sunday, April 29, 2012

Concrete Jungle Comments

Rating: 3.8

Hunched over a garbage pail,
A beggar chews scraps of bread.
The city the never sleeps,
Swallows souls that can't eat.
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Elizabeth Fontaine Grieco
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This verse has universal appeal...for a moment I thought it could even be New Delhi....it touched my heart and once again made me think if its all about Karma from previous lives or just aroll of dice that decides about our fates. thanks for sharing

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Lucy Lae 15 May 2012

I like it, especially with that bit about your inspiration, I lived there for a while and I see what you saw, city that never sleeps swallows souls that cannot eat 9/10: ]

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Elizabeth Fontaine Grieco

Elizabeth Fontaine Grieco

Montreal, Quebec, Canada
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