Sunday, September 6, 2009

Concrete Jungle Comments

Rating: 5.0

Concrete jungle, rats and cats
Illuminated cats eyes traps draw us in
Grin when you fall
No applause when you win
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Allie Lusha
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 February 2010

You have created a great poem, Allie, a bitter reality of modern life. The cities have become concrete jungle. The human beings, the inhabitants of this earth are consuming every river, mountain, and forest, every thing on the earth. The last punch lines are a real cry...10/10. Naseer

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