Concrete Jungle Comments
He swings his torch high and low,
piercing the dark undergrowth, green and lush,
casting a glow across the swampy places.
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Such vivid imagework, Ernestine...Felt like i was in that oared boat with Bogart & Hepburn, in the ' African Queen'! ....Solid Work, young Poetess. FJR
Great visual content, kept me interested...intriging as though awakened from a dream- like state only to find that you preferred the concept of the dream Thankyou Ernestine Love duncan X
Ernestine, You have captured the rain forest for the future - and don't we all love to dream - you make it appear more real than the visual memory - not so worried about the snake though! Egal..
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7/27/2025 5:20:30 PM # 1.0.0
A great descriptive piece Ernestine with a wonderful ending too. Andrew x