Concrete Expectation Comments
In long breaths expectations lead me to die
I want to take loan some times to omit sigh
Your love is one color in the coat of colorful life
The wings of heron flying on the village of blue sky
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Beautiful poem. You deserve to be honoured dear Mahtab. Many congratulations! !
In the bed of night coarse plaster captives us Lingering expectation gland lives always detach /// beautiful poem penned; let it be rock
Concrete expectation when comes to life and concrete advancement when entangles with all then all are enjoying the life of happiness- superb
Expectation like a dream floating on the land of sense or thinking sometimes it can fill its well sometimes unable to fill for the concrete life~ that's the fact of life
The wings of heron flying on the village of blue sky Endless youthful stream of Karnafully river and I Live together in poisonous vapor of manufacturing dye Dawn to dusk we're digging the pond of fate..Expressing despair you hve really succeeded my dear Mahtab. thank you. very much. tony
Dawn to dusk we're digging the pond of fate Lucy quay of life closes all around the gate....I like these.Nicely Penned
A brilliant poem that drags me to read it again and again with utmost satisfaction!
A great poem! My pleasure reading it time and again! I adore your style of penning! Keep it up!
Expectations cloud our judgement but working hard will bring us our rewards, an insightful and beautiful write!
To detach oneself from having expectations takes a lot of practice.
Lingering expectation gland lives always detach. Great poem. Congrats on the poem of the Day.
As the heartless ones have already damned many rivers like Karnafuly, are damning people's expectations, hope, desire, dreams, youth, loosing corruptions everywhere, ..... Dawn to dusk we're digging the pond of fate, but aimless for corruptions thanks for sharing the poem
Concrete Expectation from the heartless ones is quite greatly penned, congratulations on being pod and thanks for sharing the poem with us,10
A beautiful piece of poetry that can withstand the tests of time. The opening line itself will draw a reader to go through with the whole write. Each line has been woven with the greatest imagery. The double bladed meaning of this wonderful write will provoke a reader's mind. Superbly penned.10+++and onto my Poem List. Congratulations!
Nice poetic composition to read! Congratulations to you for the selection of your poem today, my friend!
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7/27/2025 4:20:18 PM # 1.0.0
Wow! Painted with fine painting strokes.... Dawn to dusk we're digging the pond of fate... Well done!