Monday, May 1, 2023
Concrete Comments
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all those English words
in a giant concrete pour
profane statues birthed
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7/28/2025 1:35:30 AM # 1.0.0
When you reverse your poem: birthed profane statues / pour all that concrete / in those English. I think that I've been listening to Strawberry Fields Forever for far too long! Awesome haiku, my friend!
2) 'words' went on sabbatical. They were meant to be placed after English in my comments. I don't wanna get in the same trouble as Don Cherry. Still think that was a hackett job done on him. And he's never recovered.
Thank you so much, Richard...and as I now reread, I notice the connection, too.