Saturday, September 14, 2013

Concerned (A Story Poem) Comments

Rating: 5.0

He loved her, so was concerned
as counseling did no good to her
about her mental agony
so deciding to bring her out of shell.
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Tribhawan Kaul
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Tom Allport 09 June 2017

a wonderful love poem that has a happy ending? .........well written

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Abhishek Mishra 27 September 2013

Great story penned in a poem...liked it: -)

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Neela Nath Das 23 September 2013

This is the beginning..........fabulous write!

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Geetha Jayakumar 16 September 2013

Beautiful poem and positive story..loved reading it..

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 16 September 2013

a truly inspiring tale of love. enjoyed it.

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Valsa George 15 September 2013

This runs like a fairy tale, but with a lot of probability! The practical joke played by the husband helped her come out of her trauma! Enjoyed! !

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Lucifera Santez 15 September 2013

wow, its great. it has a musical quality to it. a ten for it. thanks for the comment. :)

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Dave Walker 15 September 2013

A great story/poem. A great write.

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Wahab Abdul 14 September 2013

lovely story.. i love it.. well written.. kudos to you..

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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