Concerned (A Story Poem) Comments

a wonderful love poem that has a happy ending? .........well written

Great story penned in a poem...liked it: -)

This is the beginning..........fabulous write!

Beautiful poem and positive story..loved reading it..

a truly inspiring tale of love. enjoyed it.

This runs like a fairy tale, but with a lot of probability! The practical joke played by the husband helped her come out of her trauma! Enjoyed! !

wow, its great. it has a musical quality to it. a ten for it. thanks for the comment. :)

A great story/poem. A great write.

lovely story.. i love it.. well written.. kudos to you..