Sunday, June 23, 2013

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Troubled times troubled minds
Tend to walk a torrent trek
Cozy times cool minds
Carry the goal to finishing end
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Somanathan Iyer
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Ravi A 27 June 2013

The poem has a nice flow. A good concept. An idle man's brain may be frozen but it amounts to a mind that is likened to a monkey which is drunken, has been bitten by a scorpion and is also lunatic. It has no cognitive power. So, the proverb has its force. See, people do not properly know how to tame their mind and recover from their boredom. Mismanagement of time leads to boredom. Mismanagement of mind leads to all evil thoughts.

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David Wood 24 June 2013

A good concept. The devil's workshop is an idle mind. A good write.

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A very nice perception, rhythmically penned.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 June 2013

Concepts and precepts nicely put. Thank you.

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